Because there's so much MGE material, I want to make sure I'm working on the stories that people are interested in first. As a result, I've decided to put it up to a vote. I've translated the first 2,000+ words of two different stories, and made a strawpoll. Vote for whichever one most interests you. The one with the most votes by Sunday evening is the winner, and I'll post updates to that translation here every Wednesday at around this time. When it's finished, I'll make another poll with the story that didn't win, plus a new story. If no one votes, the people I play fighting games with decide without reading either.
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Case 7: Koyoi
Black Falls, Pink Dawns
By Kawamura Hitoshi
"Kill her! Kill
that monster!" Shouted an Order soldier in gleaming white armor, catching
the blade of the monster in front of him on his own.
He was shouting at a
woman. She was clad from head to toe in garments unlike those of this
continent. In her hands she held several slips of paper. His voice did reach
her, but she was unable to move.
Kill? He's telling me to kill this girl?
She could not conceal
her hesitation. From her perspective, the person in front of her was not yet a
monster. Her clothes were torn in places, and pink hair showed through the rips.
Still human, but only just. It was true that once the transformation into a monster
had begun, there was no going back. Whatever they tried, maintaining her
current condition was the best they could hope for.
But the soldier had
told her to "kill" an opponent who still retained some of her human
mind without hesitation. That bothered her. Amanomiya Koyoi was not a woman to
forget compassion, even for monsters.
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Koyoi had come into
the world in the far east, in the land of Zipangu, a small island nation whose
culture bore little resemblance to that of the continent on which Lescatié stood.
The Amanomiya clan
were a line of monster slayers so renowned that it was said there was not a
person in Zipangu who did not know of them. Monster slayers, as the name
implies, drive out monsters to preserve the order of human life.
The name Koyoi — "now
evening" — had been bestowed on her at birth by the then head of the clan,
her grandfather, Amanomiya Tōtetsu. Evening comes after twilight, the time
when evil walks. She had been so named in the hope that she would overcome
monsters.
As you have no doubt
gathered from that anecdote, from the moment Koyoi was born, she was made to
shoulder the extraordinary expectations of the whole Amanomiya clan. As was her
elder sister.
Shinonome, born a year
before Koyoi, received the same expectations of succeeding to headship of the
clan, and the same accelerated education in monster slaying.
Koyoi had a younger
sister as well, born five years after her, and named Tasogare. Tasogare, perhaps
because her age separated her from her two older sisters, grew up loving to be
spoiled. The next head of the clan was to be chosen from among the current
head's children. Naturally, Shinonome, Koyoi, and Tasogare's names came up as
candidates, but the whole clan had been saying that it was sure to be either
Shinonome or Koyoi who was chosen ever since they were small.
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An unbroken line of
monster slayers. The proof of that was the abilities they had been born with.
"Eek...!"
Before Koyoi was done
hesitating about killing, her opponent ran off. It seemed that there was
something in the bloodline of the heads of the Amanomiya clan that monsters
feared. She still didn't know what. It might be a lingering scent of the
Amanomiyas' secret monster-repelling incense, or it might be some lingering
memory or record of the monsters her ancestors had exorcised in her veins. In
any case, most monsters felt fear just being in her presence, and ran away.
That was enough to take care of most jobs.
She ran into the city
with a sidelong glance at the soldier cursing at her for not killing. She was
currently just outside the north gate of Lescatié.
The Order forces had
decided to let overwhelming numbers speak for them, and so distributed their
troops to all gates evenly. They would all charge in simultaneously at a
predetermined signal. The plan was to cut off the enemy's escape with a pincer
attack. Mercenaries like Koyoi had been evenly distributed to each gate as
well, and were to attack in concert under the direction of regular troops.
Initially, the Order
forces' upper echelons had been vehemently opposed to engaging mercenaries. After
all, the city of Lescatié was so important to the Order that it could
even be called their second holy land. Their pride, which was harder than
diamonds, would not allow them to rely on outside forces. Urgent problems
demanded sacrifices, however, and they had sought the cooperation of the
mercenary guild. Due to those circumstances, the regular troops did not feel
particularly well disposed toward the mercenaries.
Koyoi ran, her geta — peculiar
Zipangese wooden clogs — clacking on the flagstones. This land received many
contributions from the faithful, and was thus amply supplied with capital. The
district she was in was, if she had to say one way or the other, probably home
to poorer residents, but the roads, while bumpy, were in good repair.
I have to do it. This job is where I belong
now. I have to get it right, she
told herself, putting a hand to her chest.
She stopped from time
to time to sense the flow of mana in the surrounding area. Dense, clinging mana
came wafting toward her from up ahead — from the direction of Lescatié Castle — like a gentle
breeze.
She looked away. She
could see men fallen to the ground, as if through the pools and currents of
violet mana. Each of the prone figures was straddled by a woman so beautiful
that she might have slipped out of the world of a myth or a story. Every one of
them was twisting her hips with a look of ecstasy on her face. They hissed
menacingly when they sensed Koyoi's stare, then their faces suddenly paled, and
they vanished down alleys with the men over their shoulders.
Koyoi strained her
ears. From inside buildings, and down alleys, she could hear women panting and
men moaning. They came without order, but there were moments when, by some
freak accident, the cacophony harmonized like a choir and put her in mind of a
beautiful melody.
She twitched her nose.
A rank odor hung in the air, mingled with the accustomed scents of fire and
blood.
She concentrated her
awareness on her skin, and a warm sensation, accompanied by a tingle of pain,
came relentlessly in on her, riding the currents of mana. She understood. She
could not defeat that monster.
But they're counting on me. My strength is
needed.
Her heart quailed at
the powerful mana wafting from her destination. She tried to use her raison d'être to suppress it. She
thought back to how she had come to this place.
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The sun was low on the
horizon, dying the sky a delicate, peach-blossom pink. Crows wheeled and sang
in chorus. In the distance, black kites cried.
"Chanting
practice is over."
A mountain retreat
owned by the Amanomiya clan. A loud, carrying voice resounded across the wide
open field.
"Next, mana
refining."
This voice came in a
low, bestial growl, but it carried as well as the other.
"Yes sir!" Came
the high-pitched reply. Its source was two girls of tender years. It had
sounded like one voice because their tone and volume were perfectly matched.
A hut stood in a
corner of the field. Before it's door was a stump, in front of which the girls
stood side by side. Their eyes were fixed on an old man seated on the stump. He
was the owner of the low voice.
The girls were Koyoi
and Shinonome. The old man was Tōtetsu. Candidates to become the next head of
the clan received instruction directly from the current head from the time they
were five years of age. They abandoned all the pleasures of childhood to be
drilled in all the necessary skills of a clan leader — mana strengthening, monster
slaying, and finally tactics for making effective use of subordinates.
Mana refining was part
of that training. By concentrating their spirits and performing a unique
combination of actions and breathing, they aimed to increase their total mana
volume, as well as the amount they could emit at one time, and to become
capable of maintaining their concentration even if their mana should run dry.
At this time, the
eldest daughter, Shinonome, was eleven, and the second daughter, Koyoi, was
ten. They had no contact with the children in the village at the mountain's
foot. They lived every day, from morning to night, in the hut on the edge of
the field that seemed forgotten by time. They rose before the sun, ran through
the mountains to cure their drowsiness, and took breakfast. Then came Tōtetsu's lecture. After lunch
they practiced monster slaying chants. In the evenings they performed mana
refinement, then took dinner. After that they went to their own room and
reviewed the characters necessary for writing monster slaying talismans, then
went to sleep. The performed the same training regimen day after day, like
clockwork. Complaints were not permitted, and neither was defying Tōtetsu.
Father, mother.
Many times during her
harsh training, Koyoi mentally called on her parents for help. They never
answered. They had passed away shortly after Tasogare was born. Tōtetsu was hard on his
granddaughters because he was in a hurry to raise them to adulthood while he
still lived.
Several years passed,
and Koyoi came to accept the death of her parents as a fact of life. More
importantly, she had gradually ceased to run to them in her mind. In their
place, another feeling had begun to grow inside her.
I'll become head. I'll take everything on
myself, so big sis and Tasogare can relax.
Only one of the candidates
would become the next head of the clan. As head, they would inherit the main
household. The rest would become branch houses, and their responsibilities
would become lighter. At that time, Koyoi swore that she would become the head
herself in order to ease her sisters' burden.
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"Hey! Are you
alright?"
Koyoi became aware of
a voice calling to her. When she looked in its direction, she found a man in
the prime of life standing there, sword and shield at the ready. He was clad in
thin, slightly dirty iron armor, scarred in places. His light coat and bracers
were made of leather. The bare skin visible through the gaps between the armor
and bracers was covered by an armor of muscle cultivated through long years of
adventuring.
"This is no place
to be spacing out," the man chided her with an exasperated sigh. His
scowling face was chiseled with the hardships of his life so far.
Spacing out?
She didn't know what
the man meant. She had been reflecting on the past, but she was certain she had
maintained her combat posture and her awareness of her surroundings.
"Of, of course.
My apologies, Mr. Doon," she thanked and greeted him. Even if she had no
idea what he was talking about, she felt his concern was something to be
grateful for.
"Oh, it's no big
deal. We're in this together. Besides, if anything happens to you, it'll mean
more trouble for me," he laughed, but Koyoi could sense that he lacked his
usual energy. Perhaps combat had tired him.
Doon was an
acquaintance Koyoi had made shortly after joining the mercenary guild. He had
been in charge of training new recruits at the time, and had soon warmed to
Koyoi. Perhaps it was their shared tendency to be concerned for others. It was
all thanks to him that she had been able to adjust to life in an unfamiliar,
foreign land, and that she'd had no trouble with her food rations. As far as he
was concerned, he was a great senior, and the savior of her life.
If Mr. Doon is here, it will be a tremendous
help.
The weight of fear
that had been bearing down on her a moment seemed to have gotten lighter.
"Mr. Doon, it
appears that the enemy leader is in the castle."
Koyoi pointed at the
castle. her back was so straight that no one would suspect she had been running
the whole way there. Her manner toward Doon was always stiff, out of respect
for her benefactor.
"Humph... So
that's why."
Having heard her
report, he put a hand on his chin and sunk into thought. His stubble made a
scraping sound each time his finger brushed it.
"Why what?"
She couldn't help asking back, failing to grasp his meaning.
"Hmm. How should
I put it? According to the higher ups, a whole host of monsters attacked this
place, but..."
His brows furrowed.
"Doesn't it seem
too quiet?"
His words took Koyoi
aback.
It's true. This is a battlefield, and yet...
All that reached her
ears was here own ragged breathing, the sound of Doon rubbing his stubble, and
the noises of men and women making love.
"Nothing. No
sounds of swords or gunpowder. No shouts or screams."
"This is starting
to look pretty bad."
His voice, more
serious than she had ever heard it before, lodged itself deep in her brain.
The castle is the
enemy's main base, and there are hardly any monsters in the town.
That pointed to one
conclusion.
"That castle must
be pretty dangerous..."
Doon's quiet words
remained in her heart forever.
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The eyelid-piercing light of morning shook him awake.
Sunshine poured down into the room out of the blue sky
without regard for the thin curtains, dispelling the dark. Outside the window,
birds chirped their joy at the beginning of a new day.
Inside the room, however, it was still cool. Possibly some
of the night air still lingered there. It was well past dawn, but still early.
Most of the townsfolk would still be in dreamland. And while some might be
awake, hardly any could be properly active yet. It's just that hard to overcome
one's attachment to a warm blanket.
It was no different for this young man, lying here in his
bed. He stirred under the sheets and let out a groan. He was awake, but his
eyes were still closed. He groaned again, and pulled the covers over his head,
like an insect that hates the bright sunlight. Once his head was covered, a
warm softness enveloped his body. The young man let out a contented sigh, and
abandoned himself to the bed once more.
His cheeks slackened with contentment as he let himself
doze. He felt something springy, yet soft and gentle, pressed against them. It
was giving him peace, tempting him into a deep slumber. He felt like he was
falling forever, but there was no unease. On the contrary, he felt safe and
secure. Just as the young man was about to fall completely back to sleep,
however, an odd sound reached his ears. It sounded like someone breathing
deeply in their sleep.
It was puzzling. A doubt emerged in a corner of his brain
and began to grow, pushing aside his drowsiness. At the same time, a sense that
something was out of place — which he hadn't minded earlier — came to the
forefront. He was lying face up, so his pillow ought to be under his head, but
this springy fluffiness was on either side of it. And he was sure his usual
pillow wasn't this big.
"And was that cheap pillow ever this soft?" he
muttered, shifting his head. As he did so, the odd sound came again. The doubt
continued to grow.
Wait a minute. I feel
like I remember hearing that sound somewhere be...
"Ah!"
Before the young man's waking mind could come up with an
answer, something lukewarm brushed his cheek. He let out a cry of surprise, but
whatever it was didn't seem to mind; it came back for another pass. For a
moment he panicked, but he soon realized that there was nothing hostile about
the way it touched him, and regained some composure. Besides, he had a feeling
that he remembered the soft touch on his skin, as well as the sound.
"...Of course."
The young man slowly let out his breath, relaxed his mind,
and opened his eyes. All the tension went out of his body; he felt foolish for
having felt it in the first place. In front of his eyes, so close that their
noses were almost touching, was the face of a girl happily rubbing her cheek
against his.
He sighed, and looked at the girl lying beside him. Shut
eyes adorned with long lashes, softly curved cheeks, a slightly downturned nose
and a little mouth. She was breathing peacefully in her sleep. The description
"truly adorable" fit her perfectly.
The girl's most notable, however, was her hair, and the wool
that covered her body, shining pale gold in the sunlight. A pair of large,
curled, sectional horns emerged from amid her hair. The ears that peeked out of
it were, likewise, shaped just like those of a sheep.
"...Merry. I knew it."
"Merry" was the name of the sleeping girl snuggled
up beside him. She was another of the house's residents. As her appearance
suggested, she was not a human, but a beastman with the characteristics of a
sheep — a type of monster known as a weresheep.
"What am I supposed to do with you, sneaking into other
people's beds practically every morning? Honestly..."
The young man stared at Merry with a look of resignation,
and prodded her cheek. The weresheep girl twitched her ears at that, and let
out a little moan, but she showed no sign of waking up. Deep sleeping was
another weresheep characteristic. They were always, and once they did fall
asleep, they didn't wake easily. It was partly due to the sleep magic in their
wool.
"At least it looks like she's having a nice
dream."
"Ehehe... More..." Merry muttered in her sleep, as
if in answer to the young man's words. She rubbed his cheek again, still
wearing a blissful look on her face. Then, as if to say that that wasn't
enough, she rubbed her whole body against his, and held on tight. The bed was
narrow, so, naturally, they ended up pressed close against each other. The
young man felt the pressure of two bulges, which asserted themselves in spite
of their fluffy covering. His cheeks reddened. The touch of Merry's full
breasts made him wonder vaguely if this was what was meant by "sleep makes
a child grow."
Be that as it may, he couldn't stay like this forever. If he
didn't get up soon, it would get in the way of his work on the farm. He'd gone
to the trouble of waking up early, so he wanted to avoid wasting time.
"I want to, but as things are..." The young man
muttered, unable to extricate himself from the tight embrace. He let out
another sigh.
"Mmm... You got me..."
Merry was a sleepyhead at the best of times. It would be a
while yet before she woke up. Besides, when he saw her looking so happy, he
couldn't help feeling that waking her would be a bit of a shame. Of course,
part of that was also his desire to enjoy more of the comfort of her touch. The
young man was briefly at Merry's mercy, agonizing over what to do, but not
actually doing anything. It was then that another doubt suddenly rose in the
back of his mind.
"Come to think of it, Merry being here means..."
He started to wonder aloud to himself. At almost the same time, another sound —
not from Merry — came from right by his ear.
"Mmm..."
"...Of course."
Even that little sound was enough to make him half certain. Quietly
prying loose Merry's clinging limbs, the young man slowly turned his head to
look at the side the voice had come from. He saw what he had expected to see. A
bit of wry humor crept into his voice.
"I see you're here too, Rico."
Next to him, on the opposite side from Merry, was the face
of a girl puffing up her cheeks and glaring at him reproachfully. Rico. She was
cute in spite of her expression, but it only took a glance to see that she
wasn't human. Like Merry, she was a monster. To be more precise, this girl
called Rico was a monster with the characteristics of a cow called a holstaur.
The most visible proofs were the furry ears — patterned with black spots on a
white ground — peeking through her hair, and the little, pale-yellow horns that
parted her short bob. Incidentally, her breasts, although they were currently
hidden from sight by the covers, were even larger than Merry's. That was
another characteristic of the holstaur species.
...They sure are
something.
The young man remembered the times he'd touched them, and
his face grew even redder. Rico, meanwhile, was making no attempt to hide her
displeasure as she stared at the young man. He stared back, but It made him
feel just a little uncomfortable.
"Don't glare like that."
"Moo~"
The drooping jade-green eyes beneath her characteristically
white-and-black hair wavered. There was something gentle about her features
that reassured anyone who saw her. Now, however, there were faint tears
pricking in the corners of her eyes, and the corners of her lovely mouth
downturned in a frown.
"B, but..." Rico muttered, pouting. She was
normally as calm and gentle as she looked, but her expression tended to get
serious when it came to this young man. Especially when Merry was involved.
Apparently she felt something like jealousy toward the weresheep, who, despite
being a latecomer to the household, was always snatching the best moments for
herself.
"Oh, don't cry first thing in the morning. Come
on."
The young man roughly scratched his own head, then gently
brushed Rico's tears.
"Ah... Ehehe."
Rico seemed taken aback for an instant, but soon she smiled.
The effect was like a flower blooming.
"Hey," she wheedled, "do you mind if I hug
you?"
"Sure. Go ahead."
"Yay~!"
No sooner had the young man given his permission than she
squirmed up to him under the blanket, and wrapped her arms and legs around him.
She was now squeezing him for the opposite side as Merry.
"Honestly. Talk about calculating. A certain somebody
who was crying a moment ago is all smiles now."
"Tee hee hee."
Rico disregarded the young man's exasperation, and squeezed
even tighter. Her tail was almost certainly wagging under the covers.
"Mmm... I just can't get enough of this."
Rico wriggled herself even closer. Her body heat reached him
even through her clothes and fur. It was a comfortable warmth, in a different
sense from the warmth of the blanket.
On the other hand, the young man could feel his face rapidly
reddening. The barely-contained teats Rico was shoving against him were the
cause. The sensation of her springy breasts pressing on him gave him almost
violent pleasure. He was in danger of losing his reason. In fact, any normal
man would embrace his primitive instincts in the face of that.
"I get it, but..." The young man muttered, feeling
the ample chest that could almost be called the proof of a holstaur's identity.
I see. Her milk must
be so delicious because it comes from these breasts, the young man thought,
half avoiding reality. Just then, something soft pressed against his back. The
sensation resembled Rico's breasts, but it was subtly different.
He turned his head to look, wondering, and there was Merry,
cuddled up against him. Unusually for the lackadaisical weresheep, her
expression was pouty. Merry glared at the young man, making a soft noise like a
fretting infant. Apparently she'd sensed the other two flirting, and woken up.
A shade of reproach could be seen in her now-open eyes.
"Just Rico's no fair! Me too! Me too!" Merry
demanded, pouting, and hugged the young man as well. Soft wool enveloped him,
and weresheep man soaked his body, lulling him to sleep. A sense of comfort
filled him, like, and yet unlike, the one Rico gave him.
"Hey! No cheating! Just look at me, dear."
Rico, seeing the young man's eyelids droop, put a hand on
his cheek, and gently turned his face back toward her. His eyes widened in
surprise as she smiled, and pressed her lips to his cheek.
"Hey! I want a lick too."
Merry, who had been forced to watch the scene at close
quarters, reacted fiecely.
"No. Kissing is just for me," Rico declared. She
hugged the young man's head, and busied herself intently running her tongue
over his cheek.
"Mmm... Dear, you're so... mph... tasty."
Rico stared at Merry as she announced triumphantly, her
cheeks flushed. Merry, in contrast, stared back with a mixture of jealousy and
just a little vexation on her face.
"Oh... Fine then!" Merry muttered. She had been
watched what Rico was doing for a little while, but now released her hold on
the young man, and slipped under the covers as well.
"What?"
The young man wasn't sure what Merry intended to do, but he
soon found out. Once Merry had wormed her way in under the covers, she pulled
down his pyjama pants.
"Hey, wait! What do you think you're doing,
Merry?"
"Huh?"
Rico broke off her kisses at the young man's sudden panic.
"Wait, you can't... Hey!"
Merry, however, would not hear his call for restraint, and
shoved her hand further into his underclothes. He soon found himself
remorselessly stripped of his underpants as well. The young man frowned with
the unease and embarrassment of being half naked, even under the blankets. He
soon guessed her aim, however, and opened his mouth to shout that it was out of
the question.
"You can't be... Wait! Stop tha... Oo...!"
Hey Sky, I voted for translating Koyoi's story first since it seems to have a more interesting setting compared to the fluffy World Guide 2 Story. Don't get me wrong, I love a sweet scene like any other but Koyoi's story would give more exposition on Lescatie and the world of MGE, even if it's not entirely canon.
ReplyDeleteAnd I understand the lull in updates, that's life and I'm sure most of us still wait patiently for your updates :) Though I do feel it would be good if you to touch base with us occasionally even if you don't have content to post.
On another note, I spotted some typos and posted them on Sasha's story: Conclusion part if you could check it out. There are some typos I spotted here as well from a quick once-over:
- As far as he was concerned, he was a great senior, and the savior of her life.
Typo: As far as (she) was concerned since the line is from Koyoi's POV.
- They were always, and once they did fall asleep, they didn't wake easily
Error: They were always [missing something]
- but It made him feel just a little uncomfortable
Typo: Just a small thing, "It" is capitalized.
- and weresheep man soaked his body
Typo: weresheep (mana)
- She had been watched what Rico
Typo: "been watched" = been watching :)
Thank you. I did see your earlier post, and had been meaning to thank you for it when I got around to finishing, and posting, a revised draft of that translation.
DeleteAs always, I very much appreciate you pointing out any typos or other errors you find.
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ReplyDeleteSweet! More Fallen Brides! Take all the time you need, no need to rush yourself for us, I'm just glad it's getting translated at all! By the way, will you still continue your play-through of Another Story of Fallen Maidens?
ReplyDeleteNo, the author of the game posted a comment on Sky's latest LP asking him to stop since he's already in the process of releasing an english version of the game.
DeleteWas that genuine though, I can't find any mention of them actually doing so.
DeleteI would say yes, and give the author the benefit of the doubt because:
Delete- He speaks English (has read english fansites before)
- He is a close friend of KC himself
- I read somewhere a reliable mention that the game was looking to be translated. (Though, it might turn out to be engrish if Exet uses DLsite's translation service)