Due to personal issues, this week's update is a bit late and a bit short (about 2,300 words). Next week's should be back to normal, and two more should finish the story.
I've tried adding spaces between paragraphs because Blogger's formatting options are kind of awful and adding HTML to make them register as paragraphs is worse, but the base text doesn't have them because it's formatted for making into an ebook, so I may have missed a break somewhere. Hopefully it's easier to read now.
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Deruella's right hand
moved. It tugged on the talisman, and peeled it off Koyoi's skin.
Koyoi moaned. As the
talisman came off, heat welled up from deep within her loins. It was not
painful; it was, on the contrary, a calming warmth.
Half of the talisman
was peeled off, then three quarters, then, at last, it was completely separated
from her skin.
"Aaahh!"
Her whole body went
rigid, her back arched. The heat accumulated in Koyoi's womb raced through her
along with the mana.
"Ooooh!"
Next she pitched
forward, clutching her own belly. She felt the heat flowing as viscous fluid
out of the only exit available to it — her vulva.
"Aaah, oooh, nngh!"
Pleasure thrilled
through her like electric current, making her whole body give little spasms. At
last it concentrated in her lower abdomen, and she collapsed to all fours. Only
her hips moved, shuddering up and down invitingly.
"Haa, haa..."
Her body had been
overwhelmed by violent pleasure, but now she began to try to accept it. Koyoi's
body was twitching, but a joyful smile filled her face.
"Haa... Aah..."
She was only
breathing, but even that felt pleasurable to Koyoi, now that she had fully
accepted the mana. The mana-infused air caressed her windpipe, and the pleasant
feeling built up in her lungs.
No, this isn't good... Just rubbing against my
kimono is making my whole body tingle...
Her body reacted to
influx of pleasure, and that reaction lead to yet more pleasure. Koyoi was a
perpetual motion machine, recycling her pleasure and her response to it. With
each cycle, the sensation she received increased. It quickly exceeded her
limits.
"Aahn! Something's, something's coming!
It's coming!"
Entrusting her upper
body to the floor, her nails digging into the carpet in search of help, and her
bottom raised high in the air, Koyoi approached the first climax of her life.
Cloudy fluid gurgled out of her vagina, which she had yet to take anything
inside.
"Are you
alright?"
A voice called out
from above her. Koyoi raised her head, still feeling the afterglow of her
orgasm. The man, concerned for Koyoi, had risen from the throne and walked over
to her.
"Haa, ah, haa..."
Her lips and throat
were quivering, and she could barely speak. Instead, she answered him by making
a smile.
"Elt," the
man said. Koyoi did not understand what that was. Perhaps the man sensed that,
because he quickly added:
"That's my name.
I'm called Elt."
"Elt..."
She repeated his name
so as to carve it into her memory. Her loins throbbed.
"And your name
is...?" Elt asked.
"Oh, ah, my name
is... Koyoi. Amanomiya Koyoi."
"Koyoi..."
As Elt spoke her name,
two of the monsters behind him swiftly rose. One was the blue-haired girl, and
the other was the pink-haired child. The Amanomiya name was known even on this
continent, although only slightly. Both had heard of the clan, the former as
warriors who drove off monsters in the far east, the latter as a line skilled
magicians across the sea.
"Mary, Mimiru,
wait."
Elt raised his right
hand. He had sensed who was about to do what from just the sounds and movements
of air behind him.
"It's fine. She
doesn't want to fight."
The pair obediently
lowered their weapons. The weapons sunk into the floor, and soon vanished from
sight.
"Here. Can you
stand?"
As he spoke, he
extended a hand in front of her. The violet mana-mist cleared, and his whole,
unobstructed figure entered her view.
Flaming red hair. A
smiling face so fresh it seemed out of place. There were still traces of
boyhood in it. He did not seem at all like someone who had just been displaying
blazing vigor while being waited on by a group of monsters. Perhaps he earned
his living by the sword, because his frame was lean, but muscular; a figure
without waste. And looming largest in Koyoi's view, was his penis.
It pointed heavenward,
defying gravity. It was slightly darker than the rest of his skin, and, because
he had just been engaged in intercourse, it glistened wetly. A pink flush
lingered on its tip, and its veins stood out blue.
With her gaze still
fixed on it, Koyoi cleared her throat.
"Uh, umm, I'm
sorry to make you see that."
Elt gave a wry grin,
and moved to cover it with his hand.
"No."
Koyoi, who had been
slow to respond until that moment, quickly stopped that hand.
"That is, I don't
mind, so... just a little longer."
She stared at his
penis like she was trying to bore a hole in it with her eyes. She breathed
deep, so focused on her vision that she even forgot to blink. Koyoi's cheeks
reddened. The corners of her eyes drooped, and her pupils began to dilate.
I don't know why, but when I look at this, I
get hot, deep in my belly...
She was not conscious
of it, but her mouth was wide open. Her tongue was lolling out, and her breath
came in pants.
If I put this inside me, throbbing like this,
I'm sure something incredible would...
The mana had reached
her brain. Despite her lack of experience, sexual thoughts came naturally to
her.
But, I feel like something's missing.
Something, something...
Something was lacking.
Something would not fit. As she watched the twitching prick, Koyoi pondered.
The, a few beats later, it hit her:
Of course. If I want to get it in me, I've got
to make it slippery first.
She put strength into
her lolling tongue, and moved her face closer. His glans was right under her
nose. She bent her tongue up, and tickled her urethra with the tip.
Elt's face twisted,
and he let out a groan.
Aah, he looks like her feels good.
He was enjoying what
she was doing. That made her enjoy it too. She wanted to do more, to do more
for him, to make him enjoy it more.
"Aahmph."
She held his glans in
her mouth, and pressed her tongue against them tip. Then her lips hooked on the
base of his glans, and, with wet, slurping sounds, she used her entire tongue
to lick around his head.
"Aaah. That's
good."
This time he clearly
expressed his enjoyment. Koyoi narrowed her eyes in a smile at the unaffected
praise.
"Ooh, this is..."
Around the time
Koyoi's lips began to slide back and forth around the base of his glans, the
other monsters gathered round the pair. Their eyes sparkled with interest. It
was their first time seeing a mana-infected virgin employ proficient technique.
Naturally, as they had been virgins until offering their monsterized bodies to
Elt, they had been down the same road themselves. Because their heads had been
full of themselves and their beloved Elt at the time, however, they had not
objectively understood how they had become monsters.
With more wet
slurping, Koyoi was taking Elt's penis deeper inside her. Time and again his head
struck her throat. Koyoi's mind grew dimmer with each impact.
Aah, this rugged touch feels so good...
Her lids were half
lowered, and her eyes were clouded with lust. Now that she had been dominated
by mana, even stimuli that she would ordinarily have found painful were
converted to pleasure.
Elt gave a moan, then
a long sigh. He had just accompanied eight monster girls in repeated sexual
intercourse without a rest, but that had not rendered him insensitive to
pleasure. Becoming an incubus meant a dramatic increase in stamina, to the
point that he could stand up to even several days of continuous sex. The
intensity of his pleasure and desire, however, were much the same as when he
had been human.
Koyoi might be clumsy
due to it being her first experience, but she was unconsciously unleashing
technique rooted in monster instincts. It was gentle compared to Elt's wives,
who had become full monsters, but it had been only a few days since he lost his
virginity, and Koyoi's fellatio felt more than good enough.
"Ooh, Koyoi, I'm... cumming."
"Coming"? What is...?
"Nngh!"
Koyoi was still wondering
when she experienced the answer firsthand. As his member lodged deep in her
throat, and she tried to gulp down her drool and his precum, Koyoi's throat
tightened. That became the finishing blow, and Elt ejaculated. His testicles
pulsed, and each pulse released a large volume of semen.
"Ngh! Mmm? Ulp."
Koyoi's eyes widened
in surprise. Despite her confusion, however, she poured it all into her stomach
without spilling a drop. The other monster girls watched her enviously.
What is this? I'm gulping it down without
thinking, but...
An instant later, a
chill ran through her whole body, and with it came intense pleasure.
"Haaa!? Aah, aaaahh!"
Koyoi hugged her own
shoulders, quivering. Her backside lifted into the air, and her upper body
collapsed to the floor.
"Oh my, it looks
like it's begun," Deruella, who had been quietly watching over Koyoi from
behind, laughed cheerfully. The other monsters stared with eyes full of
interest.
"Oh, come to
think of it, isn't this your first proper view of a girl becoming a monster?"
With a few exceptions,
each of them had been alone with Elt in different places when they became
monsters. It was, therefore, there first times seeing someone else become one.
"Now, what sort
of monster will this girl become, I wonder," Deruella murmured with an air
of deep interest.
Ordinarily, a woman
who became a monster became a succubus. There were also some monsters who could
increase their numbers by transforming human women into monsters of their own
species. With Deruella, however, it was a little different. She was a lilim,
one of the Overlord's daughters, and so she possessed the ability to change a human
into any kind of monster. All of the mana that now blanketed the throne room had
come from Deruella's body; when it was used to transform a human woman into a
monster, her species would be determined by her character and personality.
First, Koyoi's hair
bristled. Then, black, pointed things sprouted through it. They were thick and
luxuriant like the hairs on her head, but the density of hairs on them was
higher. They were triangular animal ears. Their outsides were black, matching
her hair. Their insides, in contrast, were lined with white fur.
Next, something
sprouted from her hips as well, bursting through her kimono. Black fur. It
formed curves, thin at the base and tip, and swelling luxuriantly toward the
center.
"Tee hee hee.
What an adorable little fox."
Deruella stroked
Koyoi's new-grown tail.
"Haah!?"
Koyoi opened her eyes
wide and moaned as a wave of tingling pleasure flowed into her.
"Mmm, simply
adorable..."
With a smile, rubbed
the tail against her cheek.
"So, how did you
like the taste?"
"Wh, what
taste?"
Koyoi was wondering if
Deruella meant what she had just experienced, when the lilim continued:
"What he just
shot into you. It's called 'semen,' by the way. How did it taste?"
Koyoi looked up, and
tried to remember. But because she had taken all of it in her throat, she had
not been conscious of its flavor.
"I, umm, drank it
all without thinking... so I don't really remember how it tasted... But ever
since I drank it, my body's been all hot, and..."
"Do you want
more?" Deruella whispered.
Koyoi fell silent for
a short while. Then, she gave a little nod.
"Yes. I'd like to
drink more."
Hearing that, Deruella
grinned broadly.
"In that case,
there's a place you can drink it with that will taste much better than with
your mouth. Care to try it?"
This time, Koyoi
nodded immediately.
"Where is
that?"
"Right
here."
With a brief
"Excuse me," Deruella slipped her arms around under Koyoi's, and raised
Koyoi's upper body in one motion.
"Ah."
She spun Koyoi around,
faced her upward, and adjusted her posture so that Koyoi's lower body faced
Elt.
"Right here. See?"
Deruella stretched out
a hand and touched a finger to Koyoi's crotch. She had already been stripped of
her underclothes, so her privates were on full display to Elt and the surrounding
monster girls.
"Where I was
touching you earlier."
Deruella rubbed
Koyoi's clitoris with the ball of her finger. Koyoi reflexively pulled in her
knees and let out a short scream.
"And this is what
it tastes best to drink with."
Her finger moved
slightly lower, to her cleft of swollen flesh, and the gaping hole in the
middle of it. Her fingertip slipped inside.
"Ooooh!"
The sensation of a
foreign object touching her inner walls. It was a new experience. Deruella's
finger wiggling up and down and side to side near her entrance was enough to
set Koyoi's whole body quivering and make her face contort with pleasure.
"This is called
your 'pussy.' The cock you were just licking goes in here."
"A cock in my
pussy...?"
Just saying the words
sent a thrill down her spine.
"That's right.
Cocks and pussies are very important. You know that, don't you?"
Deruella slipped her
other hand between Koyoi's legs as well. Her two index fingers spread Koyoi's
swollen labia majora. With a wet, sticky sound, Koyoi's pink inner flesh was
exposed to the outside air.
"Aah..."
Hey Sky, happy Thanksgiving. I think I've mentioned it before, but I appreciate your new schedule. There's no need to feel rushed by deadlines though; we totally understand if you aren't able to release the updates exactly on time.
ReplyDeleteSo on to my quick proofreading before my thoughts. They are mostly typos this time:
- Deruella's right hand moved. It tugged on the talisman, and peeled it off Koyoi's skin.
Grammar: There's an unnecessary comma in a compound predicate, 'talisman'. Consider removing it.
- the latter as a line skilled magicians across the sea.
Missing: line (of) skilled magicians.
- Perhaps he earned his living by the sword, because his frame was lean, but muscular; a figure without waste.
Grammar: There's an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker because. Consider removing the comma.
Grammar: 2nd unnecessary comma in a compound predicate, 'lean'.
- The, a few beats later
Typo: 'Then' not 'The'.
- tickled her urethra with the tip
Typo: 'his/the' not her urethra.
- he looks like her feels good.
Typo: 'he' not 'her' feels good.
- her tongue against them tip
Typo: 'the' not 'them' tip.
- "Coming"? What is...?
Typo: "('Coming'?) What is...?"
- there first times seeing
Typo: 'their' not 'there' first time.
- With a smile, rubbed the tail against her cheek.
Missing: (she) rubbed the tail.
On to my thoughts:
Delete- I couldn't help but muse on the fact that Koyoi was able to speak with her mouth full, since there was no break between her blowjob and Elt cumming in her mouth. I know, I know.. it's hentai logic :P
- This following line really perks my interest:
"All of the mana that now blanketed the throne room had come from Deruella's body"
I'm speculating that line implies Druella's already married to someone, specifically Elt. She's stated to be 'laying low', so we can draw the conclusion that she mostly stays in the castle close to Elt and his harem. Furthermore, as a Lilim, it wouldn't make sense for her to not lock down a husband; practicing what she already preaches.
The profile does state that Druella infuses her subordinates with her mana, so that could explain why her mana covers the entire Castle. That would imply though, that Druella has a brand of mana that all her followers produce and spread.
There should be 2 of Elt's wives who were monsterized without Druella's influence: Primera and Sasha. Though, it could be argued that Primera was monsterized by Druella's subordinates, since the werewolves were part of the extremist faction. Sasha was converted to the religion of the Fallen God, who might be allied with Druella's cause, but should be distinct enough to have a different brand of mana.
Thanks as always.
DeleteThe first mystery is solved by that line actually being internal monologue (hence italics and only one set of quotes).
Man, was really hoping Koyoi wouldn't end up with Elt. I feel that would have been more interesting but this was already a foregone conclusion anyway so oh well. As always, thanks for translating! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks for translating!!
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