Baphomet Complex — What Kind of Name Is "Flimlight," Anyway?

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We're up past 6,000 words now, and things are actually starting to happen.

As you may notice from the above illustration, KC and Strange are not exactly in agreement as to the costume of our heroine, but — as I explained last time — Strange can't even agree with himself on this point, so it's only to be expected.

On the subject of the illustrations: Baphomet Complex three full-page black and white illustrations by KC.  In addition to the one above, there is one depicting Lilia in mid-transformation, and one depicting post-transformation sex (I swear, KC must be subject to some sort of curse that prevents him from drawing male faces).  If anyone has decent scans of the remaining two, I would very much appreciate them.  If not, I would very much appreciate some tips for making quality scans without damaging the book.

Baphomet Complex — 100% Baphomet Free

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After several delays, the first 3,000 words of Baphomet Complex are finally here.  There are about 40 pages to go, and this section contains no baphomets, monsters, sex, or anything that isn't a little girl sitting at a shop counter.

I've done a bit heavier editing on this than I'v done on Fallen Brides so far because Strange seems to be under the truly bizarre impression that almost every sentence ought to be its own paragraph.  I think they may get some kind of shock to their pleasure centers every time they hit the return key.

Note also that neither Strange nor Kenkou Cross have any clear idea what our heroine is actually wearing during this scene.  First she's wearing something so short that it lifts up and reveals her navel when she raises her arms, then later she's said to be wearing an apron (which, however short, wouldn't lift up when her arms move because it doesn't go over her shoulders), and finally KC's illustration shows her wearing a vest and a one-piece dress.