Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Fallen Brides: Koyoi — 75%


Due to personal issues, this week's update is a bit late and a bit short (about 2,300 words). Next week's should be back to normal, and two more should finish the story.

I've tried adding spaces between paragraphs because Blogger's formatting options are kind of awful and adding HTML to make them register as paragraphs is worse, but the base text doesn't have them because it's formatted for making into an ebook, so I may have missed a break somewhere. Hopefully it's easier to read now.

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Deruella's right hand moved. It tugged on the talisman, and peeled it off Koyoi's skin.

Koyoi moaned. As the talisman came off, heat welled up from deep within her loins. It was not painful; it was, on the contrary, a calming warmth.

Half of the talisman was peeled off, then three quarters, then, at last, it was completely separated from her skin.

"Aaahh!"

Her whole body went rigid, her back arched. The heat accumulated in Koyoi's womb raced through her along with the mana.

"Ooooh!"

Next she pitched forward, clutching her own belly. She felt the heat flowing as viscous fluid out of the only exit available to it — her vulva.

"Aaah, oooh, nngh!"

Pleasure thrilled through her like electric current, making her whole body give little spasms. At last it concentrated in her lower abdomen, and she collapsed to all fours. Only her hips moved, shuddering up and down invitingly.

"Haa, haa..."

Her body had been overwhelmed by violent pleasure, but now she began to try to accept it. Koyoi's body was twitching, but a joyful smile filled her face.

"Haa... Aah..."

She was only breathing, but even that felt pleasurable to Koyoi, now that she had fully accepted the mana. The mana-infused air caressed her windpipe, and the pleasant feeling built up in her lungs.

No, this isn't good... Just rubbing against my kimono is making my whole body tingle...

Her body reacted to influx of pleasure, and that reaction lead to yet more pleasure. Koyoi was a perpetual motion machine, recycling her pleasure and her response to it. With each cycle, the sensation she received increased. It quickly exceeded her limits.

"Aahn! Something's, something's coming! It's coming!"

Entrusting her upper body to the floor, her nails digging into the carpet in search of help, and her bottom raised high in the air, Koyoi approached the first climax of her life. Cloudy fluid gurgled out of her vagina, which she had yet to take anything inside.

"Are you alright?"

A voice called out from above her. Koyoi raised her head, still feeling the afterglow of her orgasm. The man, concerned for Koyoi, had risen from the throne and walked over to her.

"Haa, ah, haa..."

Her lips and throat were quivering, and she could barely speak. Instead, she answered him by making a smile.

"Elt," the man said. Koyoi did not understand what that was. Perhaps the man sensed that, because he quickly added:

"That's my name. I'm called Elt."

"Elt..."

She repeated his name so as to carve it into her memory. Her loins throbbed.

"And your name is...?" Elt asked.

"Oh, ah, my name is... Koyoi. Amanomiya Koyoi."

"Koyoi..."

As Elt spoke her name, two of the monsters behind him swiftly rose. One was the blue-haired girl, and the other was the pink-haired child. The Amanomiya name was known even on this continent, although only slightly. Both had heard of the clan, the former as warriors who drove off monsters in the far east, the latter as a line skilled magicians across the sea.

"Mary, Mimiru, wait."

Elt raised his right hand. He had sensed who was about to do what from just the sounds and movements of air behind him.

"It's fine. She doesn't want to fight."

The pair obediently lowered their weapons. The weapons sunk into the floor, and soon vanished from sight.

"Here. Can you stand?"

As he spoke, he extended a hand in front of her. The violet mana-mist cleared, and his whole, unobstructed figure entered her view.

Flaming red hair. A smiling face so fresh it seemed out of place. There were still traces of boyhood in it. He did not seem at all like someone who had just been displaying blazing vigor while being waited on by a group of monsters. Perhaps he earned his living by the sword, because his frame was lean, but muscular; a figure without waste. And looming largest in Koyoi's view, was his penis.

It pointed heavenward, defying gravity. It was slightly darker than the rest of his skin, and, because he had just been engaged in intercourse, it glistened wetly. A pink flush lingered on its tip, and its veins stood out blue.

With her gaze still fixed on it, Koyoi cleared her throat.

"Uh, umm, I'm sorry to make you see that."

Elt gave a wry grin, and moved to cover it with his hand.

"No."

Koyoi, who had been slow to respond until that moment, quickly stopped that hand.

"That is, I don't mind, so... just a little longer."

She stared at his penis like she was trying to bore a hole in it with her eyes. She breathed deep, so focused on her vision that she even forgot to blink. Koyoi's cheeks reddened. The corners of her eyes drooped, and her pupils began to dilate.

I don't know why, but when I look at this, I get hot, deep in my belly...

She was not conscious of it, but her mouth was wide open. Her tongue was lolling out, and her breath came in pants.

If I put this inside me, throbbing like this, I'm sure something incredible would...

The mana had reached her brain. Despite her lack of experience, sexual thoughts came naturally to her.

But, I feel like something's missing. Something, something...

Something was lacking. Something would not fit. As she watched the twitching prick, Koyoi pondered. The, a few beats later, it hit her:

Of course. If I want to get it in me, I've got to make it slippery first.

She put strength into her lolling tongue, and moved her face closer. His glans was right under her nose. She bent her tongue up, and tickled her urethra with the tip.

Elt's face twisted, and he let out a groan.

Aah, he looks like her feels good.

He was enjoying what she was doing. That made her enjoy it too. She wanted to do more, to do more for him, to make him enjoy it more.

"Aahmph."

She held his glans in her mouth, and pressed her tongue against them tip. Then her lips hooked on the base of his glans, and, with wet, slurping sounds, she used her entire tongue to lick around his head.

"Aaah. That's good."

This time he clearly expressed his enjoyment. Koyoi narrowed her eyes in a smile at the unaffected praise.

"Ooh, this is..."

Around the time Koyoi's lips began to slide back and forth around the base of his glans, the other monsters gathered round the pair. Their eyes sparkled with interest. It was their first time seeing a mana-infected virgin employ proficient technique. Naturally, as they had been virgins until offering their monsterized bodies to Elt, they had been down the same road themselves. Because their heads had been full of themselves and their beloved Elt at the time, however, they had not objectively understood how they had become monsters.

With more wet slurping, Koyoi was taking Elt's penis deeper inside her. Time and again his head struck her throat. Koyoi's mind grew dimmer with each impact.

Aah, this rugged touch feels so good...

Her lids were half lowered, and her eyes were clouded with lust. Now that she had been dominated by mana, even stimuli that she would ordinarily have found painful were converted to pleasure.

Elt gave a moan, then a long sigh. He had just accompanied eight monster girls in repeated sexual intercourse without a rest, but that had not rendered him insensitive to pleasure. Becoming an incubus meant a dramatic increase in stamina, to the point that he could stand up to even several days of continuous sex. The intensity of his pleasure and desire, however, were much the same as when he had been human.

Koyoi might be clumsy due to it being her first experience, but she was unconsciously unleashing technique rooted in monster instincts. It was gentle compared to Elt's wives, who had become full monsters, but it had been only a few days since he lost his virginity, and Koyoi's fellatio felt more than good enough.

"Ooh, Koyoi, I'm... cumming."

"Coming"? What is...?

"Nngh!"

Koyoi was still wondering when she experienced the answer firsthand. As his member lodged deep in her throat, and she tried to gulp down her drool and his precum, Koyoi's throat tightened. That became the finishing blow, and Elt ejaculated. His testicles pulsed, and each pulse released a large volume of semen.

"Ngh! Mmm? Ulp."

Koyoi's eyes widened in surprise. Despite her confusion, however, she poured it all into her stomach without spilling a drop. The other monster girls watched her enviously.

What is this? I'm gulping it down without thinking, but...

An instant later, a chill ran through her whole body, and with it came intense pleasure.

"Haaa!? Aah, aaaahh!"

Koyoi hugged her own shoulders, quivering. Her backside lifted into the air, and her upper body collapsed to the floor.

"Oh my, it looks like it's begun," Deruella, who had been quietly watching over Koyoi from behind, laughed cheerfully. The other monsters stared with eyes full of interest.

"Oh, come to think of it, isn't this your first proper view of a girl becoming a monster?"

With a few exceptions, each of them had been alone with Elt in different places when they became monsters. It was, therefore, there first times seeing someone else become one.

"Now, what sort of monster will this girl become, I wonder," Deruella murmured with an air of deep interest.

Ordinarily, a woman who became a monster became a succubus. There were also some monsters who could increase their numbers by transforming human women into monsters of their own species. With Deruella, however, it was a little different. She was a lilim, one of the Overlord's daughters, and so she possessed the ability to change a human into any kind of monster. All of the mana that now blanketed the throne room had come from Deruella's body; when it was used to transform a human woman into a monster, her species would be determined by her character and personality.

First, Koyoi's hair bristled. Then, black, pointed things sprouted through it. They were thick and luxuriant like the hairs on her head, but the density of hairs on them was higher. They were triangular animal ears. Their outsides were black, matching her hair. Their insides, in contrast, were lined with white fur.

Next, something sprouted from her hips as well, bursting through her kimono. Black fur. It formed curves, thin at the base and tip, and swelling luxuriantly toward the center.

"Tee hee hee. What an adorable little fox."

Deruella stroked Koyoi's new-grown tail.

"Haah!?"

Koyoi opened her eyes wide and moaned as a wave of tingling pleasure flowed into her.

"Mmm, simply adorable..."

With a smile, rubbed the tail against her cheek.

"So, how did you like the taste?"

"Wh, what taste?"

Koyoi was wondering if Deruella meant what she had just experienced, when the lilim continued:

"What he just shot into you. It's called 'semen,' by the way. How did it taste?"

Koyoi looked up, and tried to remember. But because she had taken all of it in her throat, she had not been conscious of its flavor.

"I, umm, drank it all without thinking... so I don't really remember how it tasted... But ever since I drank it, my body's been all hot, and..."

"Do you want more?" Deruella whispered.

Koyoi fell silent for a short while. Then, she gave a little nod.

"Yes. I'd like to drink more."

Hearing that, Deruella grinned broadly.

"In that case, there's a place you can drink it with that will taste much better than with your mouth. Care to try it?"

This time, Koyoi nodded immediately.

"Where is that?"

"Right here."

With a brief "Excuse me," Deruella slipped her arms around under Koyoi's, and raised Koyoi's upper body in one motion.

"Ah."

She spun Koyoi around, faced her upward, and adjusted her posture so that Koyoi's lower body faced Elt.

"Right here. See?"

Deruella stretched out a hand and touched a finger to Koyoi's crotch. She had already been stripped of her underclothes, so her privates were on full display to Elt and the surrounding monster girls.

"Where I was touching you earlier."

Deruella rubbed Koyoi's clitoris with the ball of her finger. Koyoi reflexively pulled in her knees and let out a short scream.

"And this is what it tastes best to drink with."

Her finger moved slightly lower, to her cleft of swollen flesh, and the gaping hole in the middle of it. Her fingertip slipped inside.

"Ooooh!"

The sensation of a foreign object touching her inner walls. It was a new experience. Deruella's finger wiggling up and down and side to side near her entrance was enough to set Koyoi's whole body quivering and make her face contort with pleasure.

"This is called your 'pussy.' The cock you were just licking goes in here."

"A cock in my pussy...?"

Just saying the words sent a thrill down her spine.

"That's right. Cocks and pussies are very important. You know that, don't you?"

Deruella slipped her other hand between Koyoi's legs as well. Her two index fingers spread Koyoi's swollen labia majora. With a wet, sticky sound, Koyoi's pink inner flesh was exposed to the outside air.

"Aah..."

5 comments:

  1. Hey Sky, happy Thanksgiving. I think I've mentioned it before, but I appreciate your new schedule. There's no need to feel rushed by deadlines though; we totally understand if you aren't able to release the updates exactly on time.

    So on to my quick proofreading before my thoughts. They are mostly typos this time:

    - Deruella's right hand moved. It tugged on the talisman, and peeled it off Koyoi's skin.
    Grammar: There's an unnecessary comma in a compound predicate, 'talisman'. Consider removing it.

    - the latter as a line skilled magicians across the sea.
    Missing: line (of) skilled magicians.

    - Perhaps he earned his living by the sword, because his frame was lean, but muscular; a figure without waste.
    Grammar: There's an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker because. Consider removing the comma.
    Grammar: 2nd unnecessary comma in a compound predicate, 'lean'.

    - The, a few beats later
    Typo: 'Then' not 'The'.

    - tickled her urethra with the tip
    Typo: 'his/the' not her urethra.

    - he looks like her feels good.
    Typo: 'he' not 'her' feels good.

    - her tongue against them tip
    Typo: 'the' not 'them' tip.

    - "Coming"? What is...?
    Typo: "('Coming'?) What is...?"

    - there first times seeing
    Typo: 'their' not 'there' first time.

    - With a smile, rubbed the tail against her cheek.
    Missing: (she) rubbed the tail.

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    1. On to my thoughts:

      - I couldn't help but muse on the fact that Koyoi was able to speak with her mouth full, since there was no break between her blowjob and Elt cumming in her mouth. I know, I know.. it's hentai logic :P

      - This following line really perks my interest:
      "All of the mana that now blanketed the throne room had come from Deruella's body"

      I'm speculating that line implies Druella's already married to someone, specifically Elt. She's stated to be 'laying low', so we can draw the conclusion that she mostly stays in the castle close to Elt and his harem. Furthermore, as a Lilim, it wouldn't make sense for her to not lock down a husband; practicing what she already preaches.

      The profile does state that Druella infuses her subordinates with her mana, so that could explain why her mana covers the entire Castle. That would imply though, that Druella has a brand of mana that all her followers produce and spread.

      There should be 2 of Elt's wives who were monsterized without Druella's influence: Primera and Sasha. Though, it could be argued that Primera was monsterized by Druella's subordinates, since the werewolves were part of the extremist faction. Sasha was converted to the religion of the Fallen God, who might be allied with Druella's cause, but should be distinct enough to have a different brand of mana.

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    2. Thanks as always.

      The first mystery is solved by that line actually being internal monologue (hence italics and only one set of quotes).

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  2. Man, was really hoping Koyoi wouldn't end up with Elt. I feel that would have been more interesting but this was already a foregone conclusion anyway so oh well. As always, thanks for translating! :D

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