Friday, March 27, 2015

Fallen Brides: Mimiru — FORESHADOWING


Here's another 3,000 words or so of Mimiru's chapter. It continues to move at a significantly faster clip than Wilmarina's, and the last bit gives you your first glimpse of how Deruella acts when she isn't summoning tentacles.

I would like to note that Lucella speaks with the diction of an old professor. I'm not sure I was entirely successful in bringing that across.

Also, this particular part of the development of Mimiru's relationship with Elt is something I describe to my friends in order to elicit laughter. You will hopefully see why.

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