Monday, February 10, 2014

More Paladins, Still No Succubi


Here's another chunk of Wilmarina's story.  This brings us up to more than 11,000 words, which is longer than anything I've done since my undergraduate thesis.

There is, once again, no mention of monsters in this bit and definitely no sex, but the next section opens with tentacles growing out of fleshy walls, so those of you waiting on that should be satisfied in another week or so.

This is, as ever, still a first draft, so the flow of the English is sometimes suspect and there are a lot of rough, overly-literal patches that will later be revised.

1 comment:

  1. I continue to be impressed with your dedication. Myself and my allies in the monster girl fan community thank you for your work.

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